Hi my name is Baloney Cheese and I come from a magical world in Alessandro`s brain. It is a called “Peace will be there with you”.
Well it is quite hard living in this world because there is a world about 100 km away from us and it is called the exterminators300 they are the bad people actually they are aliens that are twice the size of us.
We always win the battles because of how powerful peace is. As soon as they enter our planets atmosphere they turn good. The evil aliens transform into good and loving creatures.
The evil mastermind of the aliens is a terrible heartless monster he always wants to eat our existence. His mum eat his father and tried eating her son ( the evil mastermind` sister.)
By alessandro
November 15, 2016 at 10:32 am
this is so good
November 17, 2016 at 12:52 pm
thanks
November 30, 2016 at 9:05 am
Alessandro,
There are some good ideas here, I particularly like: ‘The evil mastermind of the aliens is a terrible heartless monster he always wants to eat our existence. His mum eat his father and tried eating her son ( the evil mastermind` sister.)’
It reminds me of the Gree Tragedy Oedipus – come to me for help if you would like some ways of developing your ideas.